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Anarchism, atheism, Atlas Shrugged, Ayn Rand, freedom, letting go, mormons, Poem, Poetry, relationships, Religion, walkabout
1.
Distant love, half-continent,
fine-toothed possessions,
mostly thinned books sailing
a cardboard sea to desert.
The last wave by
from a bicycle parked
at a school, calling itself
FREE.
2.
Sometimes molasses, in comparison,
rages as waterfalls, imaginary
friend fading out of invisibility
until the formal proclamation
of not seeing everyone’s assumption.
That day, two unlikely Elders,
badges with plastic names
danced on my doorstep
for three-quarters,
being quizzed on their invisible friend.
Then, they disengaged
and left.
3.
Once, in a flash from a fifty-scarred
field of cornered blue,
I realized there were other friends
imagined, beneficial and judicial.
Vanquished from mind,
only flesh and bone of ideals
became my close circle
of lonely friends.
4.
Now, the universe opens to me,
new imaginings and impossible potentials,
a poem of freedom, walking in glory.
Happiness is to be mine.
Yet, should they come
with silhouetted gun
to remind me of chains,
to command obligation,
to magnify my burden,
the Titan will shrug,
shattering the silver goblet
of tears against the taming of fire.
All tears lost, save one,
one never dropped,
frozen at eye’s corner.
Waiting,
struggling,
trembling,
to let go.
(written for a prompt at DversePoets on the subject of letting go)
nice…particularly like that last one…the reference to Atlas…the freedom yet knowing they are out there and could come to teach us otherwise…and the lone tear hanging on…very moving…
intriguing verse, especially liked the ending!
…quite intriguing and like the many careful references…smiles…
nice..i like how you describe the universe opening with new possibilities once we manage to let go..
Do you think any of the commentors above actually understood your poem?
Well, I did get the part about the Mormons.
Perhaps not, but this wasn’t actually written for them, or myself..but for others..been wanting to write it for sometime, and the prompt gave reason.
That was quite the enjoyable evening with the Elderly youth..learned some interesting things..
ah, I see. I always assume that when someone posts a poem, they are trying to communicate with their readers. If not for you, or for your readers, who are the “others”? Also, I did not understand your reference to “the enjoyable evening with the Elderly youth”?
The elderly youth were the Mormon elders..
ahhh
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interesting journey towards a freedom.
hopefully beyond the reach of the guns.